Monday, August 8, 2016

My Retold Rip Van Winkle Story



Rip Van Winkle was extraordinarily lazy. He was charismatic and easygoing, well-loved by the other villagers, except his wife. Poor Mrs. Van Winkle had the patience of a saint, but running a household with their two young children by herself drove her to her wit’s end. “Rip,” she told him one day as she made him scrambled eggs and tried to calm their crying son, “be a dear and pour the coffee when it’s done, won’t you?”
            “I’m afraid, my dear, that I simply can do nothing until I eat,” Rip answered casually. “Would you have your poor husband starve while he pours coffee?”
            Mrs. Van Winkle’s patience snapped. She grabbed the pot of coffee and dashed it into Rip’s face furiously. Fortunately for Rip, the coffee was only half done and didn’t scald his face. Despite that, his wife’s actions angered him. “All that I’ve done for you,” he cried, “and you throw coffee in my face? I’m going out hunting, and if I starve to death out there it’s your fault!”
            “I hope you do!” Mrs. Van Winkle yelled after him, now trying to calm her daughter and her son.
            It was the last thing she would say to him.
            Rip whistled to his dog Wolf and they went marching out of the town. Old friends and children waved as he passed by, his rifle on his shoulder, whistling a jaunty tune. Everyone in the town loved Rip—except his wife. He was in a cheery mood, despite his dark hair and short beard being soaked in coffee. His wife had given him a reason to escape from chores, and he took advantage of that.
            With Wolf at his side, Rip climbed the mountain near the town. It wasn’t a big mountain, more a large hill than anything else. But the townspeople took great relish in the hill as their pride and joy. Rip climbed it, knowing there wouldn’t be any game at the top. He knew there was a tree at the top that he could lay beneath and take a nap.
            He was greatly surprised to find a group of little bearded men at the top of the mountain, playing ninepins and drinking some sort of alcohol. Rip’s mouth watered at the sight of the liquor; his wife forbade the drinking of it. “Hello, gentlemen!” he called congenially. “Might I join you?”
            “Do as you will, Rip Van Winkle,” one of them answered. Those were the only words they spoke to Rip. Cheerfully Rip skipped the rest of the way up, laid his rifle aside, and started playing ninepins and drinking the moonshine they’d brought.
            It wasn’t long before the moonshine affected Rip and he laid down, falling asleep instantly. The bearded man, a bit taller than the rest, stood over Rip. “Laziness is repaid in kind,” he told the sleeping man. “Sleep for twenty years as punishment for your idleness. Is that not what you wanted?” Then he and his companions disappeared from sight.

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